Aly Lou Smith
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Wind

Nov 28, 2021

I wrote Wind helped by your generous donations allowing plenty of fuel to start my braincells working. My partner has suffered painful eye issues for a while now and seeing him be able to read even a couple of pages of his Sword book was both moving and a relief. I felt able to take myself off for a coffee wothought over worrying about how he would mange for an hour without me.

I am working on a collection themed on the weather and mine and Mick's relationship and will keep you updated with poems and paintings. Thank you all again for the support and thank you Brian for signing up for monthly support. I really appreciate it and will send you exclusive content soon.

Wind

Today my husband is studying swords

And rediscovering a joy in kennings

As his eye that has no sight

Has finally stopped hurting 

So the other eye can now return

To read, and record, and recognise my face

That I was scared would be forgotten.


As he quotes to me,

‘Incitement of the sorrow of the fence of battle’

I think of the shield ulcer that

Cloaked and covered his eye

His sorrow becoming the repetition

Of eye drops and eye creams

That ensuingly and eventually eroded.


The energy of unseen motion, 

Particles changed by his serpent of wound

Resulting in two pages of beloved

Literature, formal and academic

Emerging rousing and romantic

As I see eyes negotiating the leafs

Unknowingly unforgetting my face.


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