What did my critique group have to say about my editing of Chapter 24?

Quite a lot, actually. Click the video below to learn more.

https://youtu.be/huUx2AnP81w

This just goes to show how blinded an author can be to the limitations of their own work, even when they identify and acknowledge issues and try to fix them.

Our greatest challenge is translating what we see in our head to the page, and I've found that it's almost impossible to know if I've succeeded in doing that unless another person (preferably more than one) reads and critiques it.

Having a critique group to provide insight and feedback is such a great tool and it's really helped me craft the best version of my story, and it's what is going to make all the difference in getting this manuscript published.

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