This is an unedited version of the prologue for Dipped In Sin, Dante and Skylar's book. Tell me what you think. Is there something I should change? Thanks to Rogue Storm for the name of the Motorcycle Club.

This is a very rough draft of chapter 1. Do yall think I need to add something? What's missing for you?

Would love to know what you think. And some feedback. Dana Clark, I promise the Prince Albert is coming!!! lol

Okay yall!! Let me know. This chapter is kind of short!! Dana, you have your Prince Albert.

Yall this is the start of the sex scene. These are the hardest for me to write, so I definitely need some feedback. I haven't inserted the Prince Albert yet, but this and the next chapter is probably where it would go.

Yall, this is a part of the sex scene. Do I need more knife or what?

Chapter six is where sh*t goes down and we meet the Keepers of the Night for the first time. Got a question for yall though what you think?

Dante likes to watch Skylar when she doesn't know he's around. She's in her natural element on the dance floor and he loves it.

Let me know if yall want me to add anything to this chapter.

Sorry about that yall!! I had to do this at work so maybe it was my computer last night. Anyway, I've got some more details to add to this chapter so I'll do that when I actually finish the book. Tell me what do yall think of Draven Moore and how Skylar has described him so far? What do you think of their father/daughter relationship as unconventional as it is?

Yall I'm not sure about his interaction. I feel like Dante comes off as a bitch. He's got to tread lightly though--hence the conversation between him and Paolo. I need some help with this one. How can I fix it?

Yall, there was a lot wrong with this chapter that I haven't gone back and fixed yet, so bare with me! lol

Okay, so I didn't finish the edging scene. My intention is to go back and put in all the sex scenes once I finish the story.

Yall!!! This whole chapter is a sexy scene!!! It was so hard to write!!!

Skylar is about to be in some shit! Do yall think i should've made her hurt a little bit more?